My Love, My Doctor, My Progress

Our group is off to a good start, but we have a few necessary improvements.  The parts of the scene that is going we'll is our ideas.  The group has been able to work together effectively.  Even before we wrote the majority of the script, we knew where the scene was leading and what themes and analysis we wanted to include.  In addition, our scene has minimal blocking necessary due to its location, but we were easily able to agree on the blocking.  

The group as a whole is currently working on adding more lines.  The last time we timed the scene in the classroom it took about nine minutes.  We know that our time onstage will be a little longer.  We estimated that onstage our total would be around eleven minutes.  Today, we added more lines in the conversations between the gods and Ti Moune.  We were timing the scene again with the added lines, but class ended.  Therefore, we do not know how long it is with the newly added lines.  We hope to discover this on Monday.  I would guess we added a little over a minute in length, so we most likely will have to add a few more lines.  Overall, our draft is coming along well, and only a few small changes need to be made before the script is final. 

As far as performance, our group needs to, once we finalize the lines, come up with exactly how we want the lines to sound to our audience.  For example, we need to decide how creepily Ti Moune is going to talk to Dr. Goodman.  Another major aspect is we need to rehearse more.  The gods are a difficult part to play, especially when reading from the script.  I, personally, need to work on my lines so I can move on to focus on my posture, tone of voice and where I look.  My biggest struggle right now is that I never know where to look.  I think it would look good and portray the multiple personalities if I looked in different directions when I switch gods.  This would also add to the breakdown Ti Moune has as a result of the gods arguing.  If I look where other gods might be as if the gods were having an arguement with all four sitting in the room, it would add effect when I look at Ti Moune and incorporate her in the fight.  Since the gods are giving Ti Moune mixed opinions while arguing with each other, I need to make it clear to the audience when I am addressing the other gods versus when I am talking directly to Ti Moune. Again, being off book will help.  

Our overall message- Ti Moune is obsessed with Daniel- is clear.  In each scene, the lines and the way Ti Moune acts accurately portray her obsessive love.   Ti Moune’s relationship with the gods is also shown.  Like the book, the gods come out of the dark to speak to her.  In the beginning, she looks towards the gods for advice.  She knows. They have saved her before and believes they will help her again.  This is when Erzulie gives her the comb, which holds true to the book.  Another similarity is the last appearance of the gods.  They all talk to her and she throws the comb at them.  This is supposed to symbolize the way the comb gets thrown out in the book and as a result - in both the book and our script- the gods disappear from Ti Moune for good.  

In conclusion, our scene is making progress effectively.  Once we are off book and can focus more on our reactions, especially me as the gods, will likely improve even more. Practice makes perfect and we need more practice!

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My Love, My Doctor Script

[sound of car crash, sirens, lights out/dimmed, Dr G ENTERS, phone rings]

Dr. G:     The Antilles Sanitorium, this is Dr. Goodman speaking, how can I help you?… A car crash?... A new patient?... A young girl?... What’s her name?... What do you mean she doesn't know?... She lost her memory?!... Yes, you can bring her here.  We have a room for her… We will be ready for her in half an hour.  

[Dr. G EXITS.  Lights come up and Ti Moune is onstage in her bed. Dr. G reenters carrying a clipboard and pencil.]

Dr.G:     Hello, I'm Dr. Goodman.  I will be your doctor.  How are you feeling?

TiM:     I am fine, but how are you feeling? 

Dr.G:     I'm doing well. Are you sure you are fine?

TiM:    I'm fine now that you are here and I can see you are alive. 

Dr.G:     I am glad you are well. Do you remember anything? What is your name?

TiM:     They call me Ti Moune. You are not well, the Gods sent me to help you.

Dr.G:     That’s great, thank you Gods. Do you remember anything else?

TiM:     Don’t you remember the car accident?

Dr.G:     I have heard of it, that is why you are here.

TiM:     I know to make you well

Dr.G:     No I am here to make you well?

TiM:     What do you mean? 

Dr.G:     You were in a car accident.

TiM:     No, you were in a car accident

Dr.G:     No you were in a car accident, you lost your memory, I am your Doctor. And You came here so I can make you well.

TiM:     It’s so nice of you to be concerened about me but I am the one to make you well.

[grabs him (arm, hand or shoulder) he pulls away]

Dr.G:     Okay how about we take a break here. I will return later to see how you are doing.

[he EXITS, TiM starts daydraming, Gods ENTER, TiM stares after Dr.G]

G.Er:     (dreamily) He is very handsome isn’t he?!

TiM:     (starteled) Who are you?!

G.Er:     Erzulie Goddess of looooove!...As Asaka Mother of the Earth...Ag Agwe God of water...Pg Papa Ge...Er your worst nightmare...Pg I prefer sly demon of death!

TiM:     You are my Gods! 

G.Pg:     Duh...

TiM:     You sent me here

G.Pg:     Yeahh...Ag Be quiet, let the girl speak. ... As continue sweety!

TiM:     You must help me…

G.Pg:     We MUST?!...As Shhhh, of course we will help you what do you need?

TiM:     Daniel doesn't remember me.  You must help me regain his love.

G.Er:    Ahh.. Young love.. So romantic!... Pg of course you would think that.

TiM:     Please I need your help. 

G.As:     Of course we will help you, we want you to be happy… Er Take this magic comb it will help you.  It will make Daniel see who you really are. Ooh he's coming now.

[Dr.G ENTERS, Gods EXIT, while TiM is distracted]

TiM:     Where did you go?

Dr.G:     I'm right here. What are you talking about?

TiM:     Oh nothing

[combs hair]

Dr.G:     I think you misunderstood me earlier.  How about you tell me what happened.

TiM:     You were in a car accident and I saved your life. You must have forgotten me because of the crash. Now I am here to make you well.

Dr.G:     I'm sorry I don't remember that. 

TiM:     That's alright.  I'll remind you.  

Dr.G:     Thank you so much!

TiM:     The Gods sent me to you when you were injured to save your life. The other peasants didn't understand. Papa Ge tried to take you away from me, but our love was too strong.  I thought I had saved you for good, but then your father came to take you.  I'm sorry, I tried to keep us together. 

Dr.G:     That’s alright. What happened next?

TiM:     It doesn’t matter. All that matters is we are together now.

Dr.G:     I'm glad.

TiM:     I've been waiting for someone like you to fly away with me. I was so happy when the Gods sent me to you. Well obviously I was upset because you were hurt but you're alright now and we can be together forever. There are no more obstacles in the way.  I love you.

Dr.G:     Alright, that's a lot to think about in one day.  I need to take sometime for myself, sorry.  

[Dr.G EXITS, TiM looks after him upset, Gods ENTER]

G.As:     It's okay, Ti Moune. He will come around. ...Ag Stop babying her. ...Er Stop it Agwe. It's cute. Did the comb work?... Pg Does it look like the comb worked?! 

TiM:     Oh what shall I do?!

G.As:     We will help... Er Of course we will...Pg I have an idea...Er Really? You do?!... Pg Daniel should die…[Gods gasp] what? I spared his life once… 

TiM:    But I love him...

G.As:     (trying to calm Ti Moune) There's is no way I will let him do that!...Er Me either… Ag Well maybe it could be for her own good… Er How could you even say that?!... Pg Let him continue… Ag He is not good enough for her. If he doesn't see how special she is...

TiM:    He lost his memory, it is not his fault!

G.As:     Of course it is not Darling but… Er BUT what? There is no debate they must be together… Ag Ti Moune listen to me… Er No listen to me, you must follow your heart… Pg of course you would say that... As why are you always so negative… Er God of death remember! (to TiM) isn’t he your worst nightmare?... Ag Anyway, Ti Moune you must not forget about your head… As Don’t listen to him… Pg Daniel must die is the only way...

TiM:    But Papa Ge…

G. Er:    Don’t listen to that no nothing

TiM:    Erzulie, please…

(both at the same time)

G.Ag:    Papa Ge has a point… As Ti Moune you can’t… Er --you heart.. Pg --die… Ag  No… As idiot, Listen to-... Pg --me…Er --me... Ag --me… As--me

TiM:    (after Papa Ge has a point) but Agwe…(after Ti Moune you can’t) I love him… (after --you heart) Yes… (after. --die) No…(No...Idiot listen to… me) -Papa Ge… (me) -Erzulie… (me) -Agwe… (me) -Asaka

[Gods grab and shake Ti Moune]

TiM:    GODS!!!! (screams loud, rips herself away, throws the comb, Gods disappear EXIT, Daniel ENTERS carrying tray with food)

Dr.G:    TI MOUNE (pause in which she isn’t reacting) What is wrong? Are you alright? 

[ Dr.G walks toward Ti Moune, sets down tray and sits next to her, Ti Moune is shaky]

Dr.G:     It’s okay. Calm down.  Everything will be alright.  You are safe here with me.  I'm here for you. (Touches Ti Moune’s shoulder)

[Ti Moune relaxing, takes big relaxing breath]

TiM:     Oh, Daniel… (Andrea ENTERS and covers Dr. G’s eyes)

Adr:     Oh, Daniel…

Dr.G:     Andrea, is that you?!(Daniel stands up and spins around) It is you! (Picks up Andrea and spins her) What are you doing here?! I missed you so much!

Adr:     I'm so happy to see you! I missed you too!

Dr.G:     How are you doing? How was France? I don’t even know what to say. 

Adr:    France was great, but my trip is not that important.  All that matters is we are together now.

Dr.G:     It was awful being away from you…

TiM:    (pulls his coat from behind) Daniel who is that?

Dr.G: Oh right, Andrea this is Ti Moune, my new patient. Ti Moune this is Andrea, my fiance. 

Adr:    Nice to meet you.

TiM:    Fiance?! But Daniel we are meant to be together, you can’t do this to me. I love you! Don’t you love me?

Dr.G:     Ti Moune please…

Adr:    What is she talking about?

Dr.G:     She thinks that she was sent by the Gods to save my life and that we are meant to be together.

TiM:    I don’t think that I know it! And you do too Daniel. 

Dr.G:    I do?

TiM:     (getting up and grabbing his hand) Yes deep inside yourself you can see the truth.

Adr:    Do you believe any of this nonsense?

TiM:     This is no nonsense. I am to be with Daniel and you wont be able to change that. You wont! Do you hear me! (starts shaking Andrea)

Adr:    (trying to free herself) What the hell is wrong with you?

Dr.G:    (freeing Andrea) Ti Moune stop. (to Andrea) Don’t worry she’s just crazy!

TiM:     Please Daniel, I am not crazy.

Dr.G:     Let’s leave. I've had enough for one day and I want to talk to you… Alone.

[they start EXITING, holding hands]

Adr:    Did you think about the wedding while I was gone?

[EXIT Andrea and Dr. Goodman, Ti Moune is left alone in her room, staring in space a few seconds, lights dim out, Scene]

Scene Proposal- My Love, My Doctor

   Our group decided to stage the novel  My Love, My Love in an insane asylum. We based this idea on Ti Moune’s irrational obsession with Daniel. In our scene, Ti Moune gets into a car accident and loses her memory. She is sent to an insane asylum where she meets Dr. Goodman. Ti Moune imagines the story of her love to Dr. Goodman, who represents Daniel, and tries everything she can to convince him that they are meant to be together. Dr. Goodman tries to resist her advances, yet be a good doctor towards his patient. Ti Moune is helped by her imaginary friend, who is another patient with multible personality disorder. This character will represent the four Gods. When Dr. Goodman’s girlfriend, Andrea, appears unexpectedly, Ti Moune is devestated. She tries to break the two apart but fails, and they leave het heartbroken in her room.

    In this scene, Bryn will play the Gods and Andrea, who only appears briefly during the end, Wiebke will play Ti Moune and John will play Dr. Goodman. In our scene we included many small similarities to the book.  Some similarities include a comb, a car accident, the relationship between sane and insane (the rich and the poor), the four Gods, and our biggest theme, Ti Moune’s obsession with Daniel/Dr. Goodman.  While these are similarities, we incorperated them in slighty different ways that still hold true to the storyline of the book. In the our scene, we created an ending that mimicks the novel.  In the novel, Daniel marries Andrea and throws Ti Moune out of the hotel- an action that will ultimately result in her death.  Similarly, our scene ends with Dr. Goodman and Andrea leaving together from Ti Moune’s room.  Therefore, Ti Moune, in both scenarios is “on the other side of the fence.” While in the book she cannot reenter, in our scene, she cannot run after them.